Green
Eyes is a book that has no respect for genre. Throughout its
course, the novel spans the whole of the nebulous speculative fiction
genre, taking on the appearance of science fiction, fantasy and horror
all in turn. Perhaps the best way to describe it is as American
Gothic. Or even as a love story.
If this sounds like an alarming mish-mash, don't worry, Lucius
Shepard blends these ingredients together with consummate skill. If
you go to this book with preconceptions, you will inevitably find them
overturned but if you just go with the flow, you will find that
Shepard knows what he is doing.
Though no synopsis can do the story justice (the back cover
certainly fails), it is possible to sketch out the basic elements of
the setup. By using bacteria extracted from graves, a small group of
scientists have been able to reanimate corpses. These zombies (or
Bacterially Induced Artificial Personalities to use the jargon) are
being studied because they seem to exhibit heightened awareness.
One side effect of the treatment is that bioluminescent threads
form in the eyes of the zombies, causing the glowing identification
mark of the title. A more extreme side effect is that the newly
awakened zombies do not live very long, sometimes as little as days.
It is this that causes one zombie, Donnell, to escape from the lab
with the help of his therapist, Jocundra.
Psuedo-scientific zombies are a pretty uninspiring basis for a
novel, bringing to mind a sub-par episode of The X-Files.
However Shepard uses this as a jump-off point for something much more
interesting. Donnell discovers that he, and the other zombies, can
manipulate electromagnetic fields and this paves the way for the
developments of the rest of the novel.
To begin with, the novel is mostly concerned with the burgeoning
relationship between Donnell and Jocundra. It starts unpromisingly;
Donnell is understandably sullen and introverted. Even in their
clinical relationship, there is a spark of sexual attraction though.
As soon as they leave the suffocating confines of the lab, things take
off. On the road, the relationship progresses to friendship, intimacy
and finally love. It is a progression that many authors seem to
believe requires only a few quick join-the-dots passages but the
benefits of a deep examination are abundantly clear here.
Green Eyes takes place in the back-country of Louisiana, a
perfect example of pathetic fallacy. Fecund and decadent, swampy,
sweaty and sordid, it mirrors the story. This evocative setting is
coupled with Shepard's impressive prose. He is able to assume any
voice, be it scholarly, poetic or anything between. It is lyrical,
richly descriptive and brimming with imagery. He also displays an
acute ear for dialogue.
Though the focus of the novel remains constant, centred on Donnell
and Jocundra's relationship, everything else keeps shifting. Every
time the reader begins to think they know the direction the novel is
going to go in, they find the emphasis changes. Importantly, this is
never an alienating experience.
At times, the novel seems as directionless as a road movie, an
episodic cruise, but at the end we find that Shepard has always been
in control of the story and everything comes together. Likewise when
things start to get really strange (as they soon do), they never
become absurd. This technical mastery of a plot, that could easily
have run away with itself, is all the more impressive considering it
is a debut novel.